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Welcome to Estate 404 in
ARTELLA'S POETRY GARDENS OF FAME!


Click the links below to read the winning poems for the month of April, 2004.

You'll also see photos of the top three winners, and read their biographical sketches.

Poetry Gardens of Fame Index

First Place
Second Place
Third Place
Honorable Mentions





FIRST PLACE WINNER


Eileen Grobeck

Eileen began writing poetry in March of 2001, and posted her first poem on the internet in May 2001. She moderated at the Poets-In-Tents website for about three years. In June 2003, she attended the West Chester University Poetry Conference in Pennsylvania and took workshops with Timothy Steele (basic meter) and Dana Gioia (free verse: the importance of the line). She is a "young" poet who is just beginning to seek publication.

She has been drawn to and captivated by poetry most of her life. Some of her favorite poets and writers are Seamus Heaney, Tim Steele, Philip Larkin, Sandra Cisneros, Edna St. Vincent Millay, Percy Bysse Shelley, Shakespeare, Lewis G. Carroll and J.R.R. Tolkein, though there are many more.

Eileen works in the IT field as a network administrator/programmer/analyst. She is an avid beach-goer and has many hobbies, some of which are photography, art, drawing, painting, scuba diving, fishing and boating, crafting and reading. She thinks of her drive to create as a monkey on her back - a desire that must let out, and she has felt this need her entire life. One of her favorite quotes is "The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes but in having new eyes," by Marcel Proust. She is single and lives in New York.


A Redress of Clouds

They came from the east, riding
toboggans of mist; a diaspora
of low ceilings curled upwards,
wind beaten into lofty meringue peaks.


In the forefront, gauzy wisps;
long, flat streaks stretched north to south
along a meridian line. At the horizon
of sea and sky, a thick, titanium tongue
lolled against cobalt skin - sampling
the abomination of fall weather.


Thirty minutes later they deliquesced,
except for one towering column
that refused to succumb, unplagued -
a grotesquely shaped serpentrising up in a zed. In time,
its crooked steeple was blown apart
chunk by chunk. It toppled without grace.


By the end of the day they reversed,
headed back the way they'd come,
as though God had sucked all his breath back in
as I witnessed from beneath the sun.


As first place winner in the Poetic Idol Competition, Eileen won a prize package that includes a $150.00 cash prize; an e-Chapook of her poetry (up to 20 poems), attractively created and published for her personal or commercial use; public status as Artella's Poetic Idol in Residence; a feature interview in an issue of e-Artella; guaranteed publication in an e-Artella issue; free enrollment in her choice of Artella e-courses, the Artella eBook, "Behind the Veil", her choice of any e-Artella issue, and one month FREE Artella membership. Click here for contest details.

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SECOND PLACE WINNER



Denise Mihalik

Denise Mihalik is someone who believes...we understand art with our own soul's sense; we react personally to someone else's wanderings; they are someone else's and yet, when we can stop long enough to hear a message, that message belongs only to us; our voice speaks the dreams of another and we absorb their dream as our own art has the power to connect souls; art is the reminder that we are all connected. She is also an artist and a single mother of two amazing boys. She resides in Cherry Hill, NJ making the most of each day.

My Corner

my dream spot
my place of peace
the gentle
WHIR
WHIR
WHIR


coffee pot
broken
loved
tattered


billows of
dreams sailing from
my mouth
to
God's
ears


and He hears me
and He is in me
and
it is
short lived

but beautious
just
the
same

As the second place winner in the Poetic Idol Competition, Denise won a prize package that includes a $50.00 cash prize; guaranteed publication in an e-Artella issue; free enrollment in her choice of Artella e-courses, the Artella eBook, "Behind the Veil", her choice of any e-Artella issue, and one month FREE Artella membership. Click here for contest details.

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THIRD PLACE WINNER



Jenny Ryan

Jenny Ryan is a Spanish tutor from Atlanta who loves everything having to do with words. She is very excited to have found the wonderful world of Artella, because it has inspired her to find lots of fun new outlets for all that she has to say!

Evolution

Butterfly
Flutter by
Flap your wings
Crack me wide
open

Butterfly
Flutter by
Sweep your wings
Clear out what's
broken

Butterfly
Flutter by
Scoop your wings
Fill up what’s
hoping

Butterfly
Flutter by
When you've passed
What remains?

Utter I

As the third place winner in the Poetic Idol Competition, Jenny won a prize package that includes a $25.00 cash prize; guaranteed publication in an e-Artella issue; the Artella eBook, "Behind the Veil", her choice of any e-Artella issue, and one month FREE Artella membership. Click here for contest details.

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Honorable Mention

Terri Urban

I Matter

it was when she first dared to see her truth that the
winds howled.
after a time it strengthened her and she spoke her
truth
and the earth shook.
and when finally she believed her truth
the stars rejoiced,
the universe opened
and even her bones sang her song:
"I Matter!"

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Honorable Mention

Kimberlee Titus

Mahogany

You stand
Unbending
Like a tree without the wind.

No breeze
Of spontaneity
Blowing through your limbs.

Your bark is
Much worse
Than your brittle, bitter bite;

But too much
Pressure
Can cause an eventual snap.

A sapling,
I grow
Sheltered by your strength,

Longing
To climb
In your secret branches.

You promised that
With time
You would shift and grow
With the seasons

Yet you
would not change
Your colors
Just for me.

I cling to
Your sturdy trunk,
Questioning your
Unbending love

Until I feel the rush of warmth
Coursing through your veins.

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Honorable Mention

Marilyn Hansen

Greyt Life

I.
Prizes excluded her
Reputation secluded her

She stands alone
Just wanting a home
Haunted eyes of tales-a-many
halt a scan of the shape sinewy

Wait! Scars and oh, so black I see
But, she leaned on me!

Can we take her home, asks me?
Hesitatingly, “yes,” says he.

Seeing through her eyes
Caring as time flies
Protecting with passion
So inside she won’t feel ashen

The scars remind all who admire
of many more in the fire

II.
Prizes eluded him
Racing secluded him

He stands alone
Just wanting a home
Pleading eyes of tales-a-many
brown, and not so trendy

In a park, her depression lifts, her eyes troll
another unwanted—a mate for her soul

Can we take him home, asks me.
Hesitatingly, “yes,” says he

A friend is all he wants-
someone to mend his broken heart
now we thrive
with be-here-now-alive

Peacefulness, joyful-leaping—
all prizes for the keeping

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Honorable Mention

Jan Bartlett

Love is Knowing

Love is knowing without speaking.
Love is a glimpse and remembering
times past. Love is an unexpected
touch, a communication of body
memories. Love is the knowing of
when and when not. It is understanding
what needs to be said and what needs
to remain silent. Love is the warmth
of sharing a cup of tea. Love is knowing
the flavor you like best and how you like
it. Love is sharing the tears and remembering
the laughter. Love is knowing the flicker
of the tongue. Love is being together. It is the
taking time with friends and allowing them
to remember also. Love is being together.
Love is a midnight snack. It is sharing
the silence and feeling the emotions. Love is
driving with the top down. It is celebrating
life's success. It is knowing a history of
achievement and having it acknowledged.
Love is being together. It is holding hands
and remembering where those hands have
explored. It is knowing the geography of
someone's body. Love is remembering
what has been. Love is being together
even when you are apart. Love is knowing
when to say good-bye.

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